The First Night....

The First Night....

The first night he held my hand, and asked to dance.

The first night he held me oh so close as we swayed under the disco ball and flashing lights.

The first night he looked into my eyes and gently smiled. 

The first night he made me miss him... want him, to hold him in my arms... need him. 

The first night he looked at me and call me beautiful.

The First night he told me he loves me. 

The first night he left me in bed crying happily.

...

This is one first night out of many, before he left me at my worst.

Heartbroken

Author's Note

ignore grammar

Reviews

[Rae]

you really capture the feelings here... and how everything that seems so perfect can suddenly get beat down in a flash. great job :)