The Art Of Prose

...older love 'scribble' pulled off the shelf and edited some...

THE ART OF PROSE

(sometimes, your muse grabs you and wont let go…)

Mon Ami-

the art of prose

flows smoothly from your lips. 

It drips innuendo rhythmically

transforming desire

into a kiss.

A kiss

THE kiss,

your kiss

flavored by a whimsical

word interplay

dancing seductively

on a speeding, golden orange sunrise;

dancing the way untamed adjectives

wrap their legs hungrily

around visceral nouns

creating rocking metaphors

filled with apricot cream.

~~~

Mon Ami-

the art of prose 

flows enticingly from your lips

and I want

to lay with you.

Taste you.

You

laughing, sighing, moaning

in my cool violet,

sunset arms.

~~redzone 4.16.06

            

Author's Note

thanks for reading... I love this song and thought it captured some of the desires in the poem...

Reviews

[m.s.early]

Great way to illustrating writing. I love poetry about poetry (or poetry about prose for that matter).

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the comparison of the art of prose compared to the art of making love.

nicely done.

jacob

[redzone]

Thanks Jacob.... I am glad you got what I was trying to do... this is an older poem, but I have been feeling more romantic lately and wanted to share this and these feelings..

[Sami Khalil]

I think Alicia Keys is one of the most talented singers.

[redzone]

she is at that Sami, very talented

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).....

[Sami Khalil]

"A kiss
THE kiss,
your kiss
flavored by a whimsical
word interplay"

[Sami Khalil]

This is a pure art work.
"wrap their legs hungrily
around visceral nouns
creating rocking metaphors
filled with apricot cream."

I love the song you included too...:)...........................

[redzone]

Thanks so much Sami... I was trying something new with these lines, actually liked the way they came out... glad you got and appreciated them...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).....