LOVE

... don't know why, but someone stole my "cranky pants"..

LOVE

is raging, like the sea.

It is constantly in fluidity

with its yellowish-greens,

bluish-grays,

different shades

of complicated waves.

~~~~

Sometimes it is wild,

unnameable,

untamable,

engulfing you with undulating desires.

Other times, gentle

smoothing you in drowning undertows

of the exotic

erotica

of life.

~~~~

But always

love is a tsunami

even when just holding hands;

watching you comb your hair;

or finding your eyes smiling

as you tease me.

~~~~

If you dare to listen,

willing to ride its pulsing beat,

you may find love can last forever.

Like the blue-green raging sea.

~~redzone 9.8.14 

Author's Note

thanks for reading

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Nice tie in to the ocean and tsunami imagery. Have to say, though, noticed an it's that should be its because it is possessive. Also, bluish unless, it is poetically licensed.

[redzone]

aaarrrrgggggghhhhh.... spell check did not catch blueish (bluish)... and I see the it's... KL you are going to keep me honest aren't you... no bad English or grammer allowed!!! ok ok, sitting in corner and writing 1000 times each: "I will spell words correctly" and "I will only use good grammar" do I need to clean the black boards and organize all the books too??? ;-p

really though thanks KL I should have caught these...

[redzone]

2000 " will spell words correctly" because of "grammer"

[Lyn Anderson]

No problem, man, that's what the GRAMMAR kitty cat is for. And catch me, if you can, I welcome it:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Describing love as a tsunami, that would about cover it… very nice poem that is accurate in describing true mysterious emotion that cannot be defined.

[redzone]

unnameable and did you know that there is silence right before a tsunami hits... and then WHOOOOOOSH. thanks Dale, and as I understand it from your poetry, you have been swooooshed and so know the untamable...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes love once again wiped me out. For some reason i keep getting up and try to ride that massive wave.