FEEL   (10W)

FEEL (10W)

A Poem by redzone
"

...just wondering

"
FEEL   (10W)

Will you ever feel
the poetry I see in you?

~~redzone 7.5.15 

© 2015 redzone


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redzone
...thanks for reading, it's been a while.


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oh i love the song by calvin harris :) - some people will do, especially poets, but some wouldn't see the beauty, the tragedy, the hair-splitting, heart-rending emotions inside you could feel in them, everything is subdued to them, but that works, too

best,
steph

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wowww..so much deep words........

Posted 8 Years Ago


I do hope so. Beautiful sentiment.

Posted 8 Years Ago


These ten words say so much. If you love someone, they are poetry in your eyes...in your heart. Too many people have low self esteem and can not see how wonderful they actually are. This one line holds so much love, admiration, and romance. Wonderful, Curt. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


An excellent brevity that sums it up marvelously. Glad I stopped by to visit. Hope all is well with you...:).................

Posted 8 Years Ago


i have thought this of a few friends...and eventually with a couple of them...i did get to see it.

lots implied with these two lines...

Posted 8 Years Ago



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