"So Kiss Me"*

...it's Friday night and I love this song

“So Kiss Me”*

down by the raging river

under the shade tree

in the middle of the day

            kiss me

under the silver moon light

with fire flies glowing

and dreams danceing

along the milky night

           kiss me

oh oh be my sparkling

forever, whispering sweetly

your lips tasting me

like it was our first

          kiss me

swing swing me into your

guitar-scape melodies

out on the valley green

yellow and wildflower blue

          kiss me

“so kiss me”.... “so kiss me”

more and more

kiss me

Aztec Warrior/redzone 6.24.16

*Note: the title of the song by Katie Melua

Author's Note

....thanks for reading...

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Pretty expressive of a free and unexposed desire with a true love. Just so neat!...............Kathy

[redzone]

thanks Kathy, nice of you to say and thrilled you stopped by to read...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I like how you have a video suited perfectly to each poem.
I liked this one to very sweet little poem.
sounded very poetic. I mean some poems on this sight are meant to be poems but don't sound like poems, where as yours does.
Keep writing :)

[redzone]

sometimes I start writing and the song comes into view and sometimes I listen to music an a poem flows out of it... I am glad you have found these words to be "a poem", cimmy, thank you

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I am the same have got allot of inspiration from songs.
Your very much welcome :)

[12.09am]

I loved this !! so so good

[JBoone]

I think the best thing about this is the imagry used to se the scene for each opportunity for a kiss. Very romantic but also very real. Not cookie cutter but very creative. I love the song as well. Well done.

[redzone]

Thanks JB, I like this song and thought of it when I started to write the poem.. so glad you enjoyed the poem and the music....

[Inject Positivity]

Awww!!! This is so cute... I really loved the different moments you have said about kissing... What a wonderful way to put the innocence and sweetness of kissing into words... There is nothing better than a love filled kiss from our beloved... So sweetly done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[redzone]

thanks Dhiman for your words and for your stopping by, i appreciate the words and visit...

[Lydia Shutter]

Nothing as passionate...as urgent...as that first kiss. The one that starts the world spinning, the waves crashing on the shoreline of passion, the silvery man on the moon to smile. The taste of passion flows through this one. The excitement of a new relationship that can last, but often does not. I was swaying with the words, Curt. So very "nice". Great love poem. Lydi**

[redzone]

I always love your visits Lydi, yes for the "nice" reviews, but you always add a dimension or two or three to what has been written... and once in a while even a "sway"... thank you Lydi...

[Lyn Anderson]

I love the line "lips tasting me" sounds much sexier than "mine" -- one minor suggestion -- not to be adhered to if you do not wish -- perhaps shady would be a better choice than shade, or even shade of the tree -- just rolling with your rhythm here, but maybe you like to stop and change the rhythm up mid stream.;) ps I love this song too -- I am pretty sure I used it on some poem or other, though not so effectively as this piece.

[redzone]

thanks KL, it's a good suggestion.... that first stanza is a bit choppy I thought as I wrote it, "shady" may be a good solution... in a few of the poems I have written lately, I have tried to use the music and its motion also be reflected in the poem itself, so that when people read they are also hearing the music (even if they are not playing the song embedded with the poem... ) and then too, to have it change up in the middle or end or somewhere in the poem.. I do not always succeed in this...

you may well have used this song in one of your poems, it's a good song... I was watching a movie and this song was in the background so looked it up and wrote the poem...

anyway, thanks KL I always enjoy your company in my poems and your ideas and reviews...

[barleygirl]

I like the way this isn't so much describing the kiss/kissing, but showing us various different beautiful settings where a kiss would be like the cherry on top of a sundae. I love the idea of being in a relationship/friendship where the natural, logical, spontaneous thing to do is to kiss, rather than talking or otherwise distracting ourselves from a precious lovely moment in time. I'm not familiar with your chosen song, but this reminds me of another song -- just shut up & kiss me! *smile* Kissing takes us away from the cerebral enjoyment of a setting, so we can just soak it in on a sensory level. Great poem!

[redzone]

wow! and yes, it is more an invitation than a description and I can't think of too many things more wonderful than a kiss, many kisses... so Ms barleygirl when are you coming to the east coast to... kiss me!! hehehe er... I mean thank you for such a wonderful review... ;0)

[barleygirl]

I like kisses, too . . . but the ones I get nowadays are mostly from long slurpy tongues around here! *tee! hee!* . . . We could just sit & kiss to get to know one another, becuz I'm not very good at conversation (((HUGS)))

[redzone]

Margie, you nare getting more action than I am... lol so if you kiss me I will gladly wag my tail and let you rub my belly... woof woof running in circles jumping up and down... lol as you can see my communication skills are not highly developed...

[barleygirl]

Big smiles (you're adorable & loveable) . . . watching Eric Clapton's Crossroads guitar festival on TV right now . . . I got all my chores done before the heat has cranked up for today, so now I think I need a puff & some horizontal lovin' action . . . *aaaaahhhhh!* (((HUGS))) . . . Oh yeah! Vince Gill just started on a snappy toe-tappin' tune!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminds me of someone who made my knees wobble when she kissed me...even the thought of those kisses makes me have to hold on to something, not to fall over.

thanks...

j.

[redzone]

here Jacob let me help you up... and happy to help you have such a wonderful remembrance of such a knee buckling, fall down kiss...

[Ana Papaya]

Very romantic words red, I really liked this one.
Good song too.

[redzone]

I am so glad you did Papaya, thank you... it is good to see those red high chuckies again, I must admit I kinda missed them...

[Ana Papaya]

You're welcome and thanks! :)