Into You

Into You

A Poem by redzone
"

...some fantasy with music

"
Into You

oh, you can go
or you can stay
and I’ll walk with you
until you fade
into that strange place you go
where oblivion eats you so
you are known only to shadow
and a crying
midnight blue;
where I long to follow
and fade along with you.
"fade into you."

Aztec Warrior / redzone 7.16.16 
Note: quoted words at the end is
the Title of the song embedded below

© 2016 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
...thanks for reading...


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I get too attached to people sometimes, not everyone, very few actually.
But once I attach myself I can't let go. Love is forever, even though you're not together (forever)

Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

yes, love in many ways is forever and it means going where they go when they are hurt or alive with .. read more
For better or worse....till whatever and however happens? Someone who will walk with you till you fade and stay with you when you glow....that is someone to cherish. No need to understand why that person fades....just be there for the person. It never goes unnoticed. Filled with strong emotions, Curt. Very "nice". Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

thanks Lydi for your kind words on this poem.. sorry I am so late with my tahnk you....
this for me is about hanging in there with someone no matter what...not only there for the smiles, but there for the chills, the pain as well...

let me love you no matter what...
let me fade into that oblivion with you.

j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

yes and that oblivion is sometimes safe and comforting... lol.
but yes, I like your take on t.. read more
I know this feeling exactly . . . I've felt it from both sides now . . . this is what makes me afraid to hold on tightly . . . instead I try to hold on loosely . . . it seems so many times "the fade" comes into play for reasons that are not clear. Thanks for sharing your message which is both cryptic & crystal clear (((HUGS))) . . . I hope you're feeling well & enjoying the weekend, my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

I appreciate your words here very much and in reading many of your true stories know that you have f.. read more

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