A Poem

A Poem

A Poem by redzone
"

… found in one of my notebooks...

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A Poem

 

oo0oo

 

Dream like, innuendo breathes deep

moving slowly in a heart beat.

And then you said, ‘Hi’.

Reality

flowed quickly from a dream.

 

What is a dream

but a shadow roaming the mind.

Illusive, like fire in a red dress

dancing bare foot to music

only you can hear.

 

And then you said, ‘Hi’.

 

oo0oo

 

~~redzone 6.9.09


© 2019 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
.... thanks for reading..

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this is cool...reminds me of my youth...and the crush i had on this certain girl, never imagining in a million years she would notice me...then she said "hi"---

needless to say...i was totally inept, and speechless...
ah chances lost..oo0oo no.

Posted 5 Months Ago


redzone

4 Months Ago

thanks Jacob, ah, those youthful days when we were too shy and had crushes every other day but were .. read more

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