Seven Proposal Killers

For Weird Writers Prompts. Nice idea. had to run with it.

He picked the perfect day;

Sun shining sublimely,

Picnic in the park,

Romantic idea.

Picked the perfect ring;

Three stones set in platinum,

Two months of paychecks,

Hid the box in a dozen roses

That he handed her

When he took off the blindfold.

 

She said no.

 

Told him he was:

Irresponsible

Codependent

Unreliable

Insufficient

Irritable

Unimportant

 

…And she was gay.

Reviews

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

Lol!!! Nice! Love it!

[Short.Nerd]

AWesome poem!! Love the ending. (:

[goltinfron_nh]

makes you wonder why she was still with him... nice poem.

[Kes]

lol I loved the last line!

[nono]

Very nice, INTERESTING!! The ending was very surprising! And I love the words you used!! This is awesome! Keep up the good work!