Life:P

Life:P

A Poem by revenant21
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Idk. read and review i guess.

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As I was walking home from school one day,

I glanced into the sky.

I felt a sense of enlightenment,

Like looking through His eyes.

I could see all those that would come to be,

And all of those that have.

I could see the beauty of the world,

And the sin beneath our masks.

I sat down on the pavement,

Contemplating my visions.

I sat there on the sidewalk

Questioning the world.

"How in that little upward glance?"

"Did I see the million years to come, and all of those that have?"

© 2008 revenant21


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revenant21
ignore grammar and spelling please.

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I love this! I think you really shocked Prescott with it too. I am going to try to add something tonight, but I don't know if it will be good or not. Luv you! Ainsley

Posted 15 Years Ago


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