Speechless

I look into your eyes
The gold that shimmers there
The moonlight luster bounces
from your dark obsidian hair
Your eyes still hold my gaze
I wish to look away
But those auric pools of irises
Look till dusk turns into day
I feel I should speak to you
But no words come from my lips
My throat goes dry, numb goes my tongue
My head throbs, in my chest my heartbeat rips
Your gaze is holding stronger
My mind trickles toward a haze
Now our day turns into night
Your hair with that moonlight glaze
Still no words fall from my tongue
My throat attempts to swallow
Your beauty in the moonlight
My breathe goes heavily shallow
My fist is tangled in your hair
A midnight lover's embrace
My heart raps in my ribs
The world around is null space
While I look into your eyes
And no words can come to mind
The stars above twirl a dance
And my mind has come to find,
That when you're staring into me
With your eyes of auric beauty
no words can describe
How you strike me Speechless

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

very good!

[deeps]

This is so wonderful, I like this write alot.
I think this is so wonderful and beautiful.

[Tori]

I agree it was very sweet. No matter how twisted it may be. You use such amazing descriptions and words!

[Kon™]

Sweet and beautiful poem :D It was very descriptive and it made me speechless as well. You have so much descriptive phrases and words, it was like imagery. The ending was great too. Wonderful job ;)

[SoulofManyFaces]

This is a sweet poem, reminds me of young love and the
feelings that go along with it.

[Phibby Venable]

beautiful and visual..

[Holly]

That was a wonderful poem!!! Very descriptive. I loved it. :)