Three Cokeheads in a Bar

Three Cokeheads in a Bar

A Poem by Cahjli Symes


Chillin in the belly of
The Beast.
We say the truth's a lie,
because we're sick from
what we see.

to what we know
because of

In a fake reality
where tyranny is
seen as peace.

And illusion is a weapon
cloaked as peace
for sodomy.


© 2017 Cahjli Symes

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The statements in the poem. Each set of lines. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you Cahjli for sharing the entertaining poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Is this about alternative facts? Or just the blind eye people turn to terrible situations that seemingly have nothing to do with them? Either way, I enjoyed this poem

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cahjli Symes

7 Years Ago

Fake news lol
I dunno. Other than to try to shock the reader, what's the purpose? It's not a poem by structure, and certainly the language isn't poetic. And, you make assumptions that don't track.

"We say the truth's a lie"?

Who's we? Certainly not anyone I know, or have ever met. And you don't define which truth this unknown "we" say is a lie. So in general, you're saying,

Things are bad,
And gonna get worse.
I feel so blue,
And I like to curse.

It's been done.

Posted 7 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cahjli Symes

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your review sir. :)

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Added on January 18, 2017
Last Updated on January 18, 2017


Cahjli Symes
Cahjli Symes

Cloud City, FL

Hi my name is Cahjli and I write poems,screenplays and lyrics. Hope you enjoy :D more..