Untitled 06/06/2010

Untitled 06/06/2010

A Poem by Raven Wilson

It really hurts

when you want something so bad you would sacrifice everything for it

and your best friends tell you it will never happen

because you aren’t “cut out for it”

you don’t have “people skills”

you suck at everything that it requires

everything it means is all “wrong” for you.


It has been the only thing you have ever been sure of

the only thing you’ve truly ever strived for

and they bring everything crashing down

because they can’t seem to “see” you were you are longing to be


Well i tell you what

I am realistic, I am the only realistic one

they have no clue what they’re saying

because They have no clue what i am really capable of

they have never given me the chance


My best friends, i wouldnt give you up for the world

but i would for this

because I know

I know that I can do it, with or without you.

© 2010 Raven Wilson


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Raven Wilson
Please ignore grammatical and spelling errors.

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Very strong emotions here

Nice work!

Continue to express yourself. :)




Posted 13 Years Ago


"My best friends, i wouldnt give you up for the world
but i would for this
because I know
I know that I can do it, with or without you."

great sense of empowerment!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Raven Wilson
Raven Wilson

~~, NY



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My name is Raven, I currently reside in a very obscure little town near the Canadian border in New York. At this moment I am eighteen years of age. My favorite topics deal with heartbreak, pain, loss,.. more..

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