Stella

Her hair was golden

Strands like the rays of the sun

Eyes, so deep and blue

Like the ocean, so vast

Her smile was warm

Like that of summer's breeze

She was silent, but her actions spoke

And I understood, like I knew her for years

Who knows?

She might be a ghost

Or maybe a sister, destiny forgot to give me

Now she is lost

And she will never visit again

Author's Note

This poem is a short description of my long-lost imaginary friend. I called her Stella :P

Reviews

[eglantine]

awww, imaginary friends are great. I used to have imaginary monster friends lol i was a strange one...

thanks for sharing, i enjoyed it. ALthough, honestly, if not for your author note, I never would have known it was about an imaginary friend.

[Cerise]

Awww...wonderfully described..:D

[Southern Cross]

Kinda reminds me of some internet friends I have had..You always make me feel magical while reading your poetry

[Aehr]

that's such a big compliment, Nicole! Thank you! :)

[AK]

Wow! This poem is really nice! It reminds me of my imaginary pet cat Iceapple..but good ol' Icie is still with me, unlike Stella. Great poem, Rhea! But I know, that she can return if you let her to. Keep writing!

[Aehr]

I should use your advice...
I should let her return...

[AK]

Indeed!

[Aehr]

Wow, I wonder now too where Stella is...
You have a way with words young lady.
I really admire.

E.L.

[Aehr]

why thank you!

[R.A. Youngblood]

Kinda creepy at the end, but i like the imagery.
"Strands like the rays of the sun
Eyes, so deep and blue
Like the ocean, so vast" i like the way you put this. It's like a dream, beautiful.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

[Aehr]

thank you!

[R.A. Youngblood]

You're welcome!