Till I Visit Again

Closed eyes

Portals to other worlds

Where I fly, where I live

Colorful skies,

Vibrant hues of water

Music as gentle as a lullaby

People from present lives and the past

Come for visits 

My eyes thirst for more

But with the break of dawn

It all fades back into darkness

I bid farewell to that land

Till I visit again

Author's Note

Something I wrote about dreams, and how I see them. Please review! :)

Reviews

[natzky]

yeah...really good..:)

[Cerise]

its wonderful but i think even widout last line it would have sounded bettr...well ur work..:)..but wonderful ovr all

[afra]

so beautiful ...i love it ....well done

[eglantine]

Good imagery. I don't think the last line is needed since the poem already informs us it is a place in the speakers dreams

[deepblue04]

I really like the imagery that you used. It makes the picture crystal clear. I like it good job!

[MOON]

Vivid write , lovely.

[Pax]

beautiful!

[The Fallen]

This poem is beautiful, I can clearly visualize this world it feels like a fantasy (: