Don't Leave, Please

Don't leave, please

I can't stop my tears

The bitter taste on my tongue

The awakening of fears

Don't leave, please

It hurts really bad

It's driving me crazy

It's making me go mad

Don't leave, please

You know I'll miss you

The days we spent together

Even if they were few

Don't leave, please

But I know I can't stop you

So always remember

I'll always miss you

Author's Note

My best guy friend is leaving school.. :'(

Reviews

[Danielle]

A lovely expression of connection!!!

[Craba]

Wow such an emotional read, sad as well. nicely written

[J. J. Nightingale]

Those first friendships are never forgotten .. We go our separate ways , lose track of times .. .. Later wondering what ever happened to those we held and told ..

I hear you .. been there .. remembering here . . Jazz

[MOON]

Sad emotional write , loosing a friend is difficult.

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem. Hard to lose a friend. At least we have internet and the phone. Always can keep friendship alive. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Aehr]

i agree sir. and thank you! :)

[khalid]

the worst feeling in this life is the feelings of leaving someone we love. i like how you have expressed such pain here

[Mark]

Very sweet. and sad. Nicely written.

[Redrascalstrawberry]

This is so cute...sad....but it's nicely written...your emotions have been perfectly jotted down in this poem.

[Ice]

>.< Such a sad yet beautiful poem! Well done!

[Aehr]

thanks. i'm happy he's not leaving. just a crazy rumor...

[Ice]

That's good!

[Aehr]

i know. he almost gave me a heart-attack! :P

[Ice]

Haha i know that feel!

[Aehr]

yea..

[Southern Cross]

Real friends never leave us...I am sure you will continue this remarkable friendship over the distance

[Aehr]

he's not leaving!! it was a rumor!!-

[Southern Cross]

:)