We Didn't Break Up After All!

Tear stained pillow lying on the floor

The creaking sound and the closing door

Your voice sounding more like a roar

A scream and a shout from my heart's deep core

And there, you're off to God-knows-where

And I silently swear I won't be there

Because we both know that you don't care

Mom's right, good guys are really rare

It all seems dead and black and white

I wish we hadn't fallen into a fight

You're so insane, Mr. I'm-always-right

I can't help but stare at the horrible sight

I' staring at the phone when I get your call

Into another fight, did you fall?

My face lights up when the words you sprawl

We didn't break up after all

Author's Note

Inspired by the second stanza in 'We Are Never Ever Getting Back Together' by Taylor Swift. It has a humorous side to it. :P

Reviews

[Danielle]

This is very good, also relatable, nice!

[Flutterby aish]

Rhea........this one is simple bt effective n so i lv it!!!

[afra]

awwww i can totally relate to this ...good job
PS i love that song ...=)

[Aehr]

thanks. i love that song too. I can sing it in my sleep even!

[Marissa]

I like this! It's very nice. I really like the part "You're so insane, Mr. I'm-always-right" that's really great and holds great meaning. So, many people think they're always right which ruins so many great things by the fights. Great job!

[paparapapa]

Haha. I love how the swearing and the bitterness just suddenly flew away with just a few words from the guy. :)) i think it was pretty cute. Good job. ;)

[Aehr]

thanks. I've seen relationships that work that way :P

[MOON]

Lovely flow and true good write.

[Aehr]

thank you! :)