the evil

the evil

A Story by rea rea

just thinking


as i watched you swallow your problems looking for the answers you would never find i wondered "why me" did i make life that much harder for you or was i not good enough for you?no matter what i did the evil in the bottle always prevailed itself. night after night i lay awake to protect the others and try and keep the evil out. wishing that if i just close and lock the door the evil would disappear. the words it spoke and the beatings it gave and all the things never forgotten and all the things that have never even began to be fogivin. the evil is what you lived for not me not her not him. well the evil is back into your live and will never return to mine and i have finally been able to shut and lock that door that evil once walked though. the evil will not prevail in my world any longer. its now your evil.

© 2008 rea rea

Author's Note

rea rea
just getting a few thing off my chest

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Sometimes the raging beast inside us makes us do it. Sometimes it's an outside influence that takes control of that beast. It knows exactly what it wants and knows how to get it, destrying everyone else in the process. Nice piece! I like it!

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Added on May 11, 2008


rea rea
rea rea

astoria, OR

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