It is all too late

It is all too late

A Story by Asakara Yoruto

When I see you, I wanted to protect you. When you are beside me, I am very happy. When you are about to go away, somehow it feels lonely. Keeping this feelings for quite a long time, just right about I wanted to confess this feelings... there is no more chances.

Murdered, died, disappeared. You leave me alone without letting me confess this feelings... no, I am the one that is wrong! Why am I not confessing my feelings earlier? If I confessed, maybe the thing won't going like this!

There are times when I think the way to chase you. Living without you in this world is meaningless. Why you have to go so fast? Why are your faces were stopping me from chasing you? It is... hard you know...

Is there anyway to chase you without dying? That's almost impossible.

"It's possible. Maybe just talking, that is all we can."

I live on waiting for that day to come. I believed that day will come. Just need to wait... but when that day will come?

© 2015 Asakara Yoruto


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I love the sense of urgency in this story. It really gets you wondering, "What's going to happening? What happened?". It gives almost a sense of mystery too. I love it! Some things to notice however, are the occasional grammar issues and the lack of a sustainable plot. That is all however. It's a nice little short story.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asakara Yoruto

8 Years Ago

Thanks. I used my phone to write this one, so I haven't re-checked the grammar. For the plot, I don'.. read more
Ashley Arita

8 Years Ago

Your welcome. But yeah I don't know why I wrote plot either. I guess maybe it needed more emotion or.. read more



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I love the sense of urgency in this story. It really gets you wondering, "What's going to happening? What happened?". It gives almost a sense of mystery too. I love it! Some things to notice however, are the occasional grammar issues and the lack of a sustainable plot. That is all however. It's a nice little short story.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asakara Yoruto

8 Years Ago

Thanks. I used my phone to write this one, so I haven't re-checked the grammar. For the plot, I don'.. read more
Ashley Arita

8 Years Ago

Your welcome. But yeah I don't know why I wrote plot either. I guess maybe it needed more emotion or.. read more

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