Ku Hai

You figure it out

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Backwards this write to

Decided I so head my

On standing was I

Author's Note

... that didn't help my neck much! ...

Reviews

[Oxidiz3r]

Totally awesome! I can't tell you how much I agonized once over writing something so simple. I think of haiku as something that should be simple but convey a strong--or at least interesting--message. And this is so simple and so interestingly silly! I love it. :)

[cest la vie]

Clapping and nodding at the simplistic genius of this..

Awesome:-)

[lauren emily]

I LOVE this piece! It's just so unbelievably simple..and yet so creative! Very nice work, my friend!

~Lauren

[FoolsGold23]

hahahaha, Oh I LOVED this one, I seriously chuckled, though with a writing position like that, I reccomend a heating pad, but upside down Kai Hu really works for you friend! ~P

[Lily1111]

Very interesting and original, just like you! I had no idea you had taken up yoga. LOL
Honestly though, this was very creative.

[Rainbowco]

Imaginative senryu.

[An owl on the moon]

Absolutely loved your twist on the haiku! Like a riddle or secret message, your words brought a new light to this form!!! Excellent!

Craig

[Rita]

Who else would write something as hilarious?

Go Rich!!!!!!! woo

[Seriana]

Ha!! How cute. :) You such the clever one Rich. :)

[Autumn's Child]

Love it!!!! You make me laugh.