The best way to save

Dangerous liaisons often lead to miserable conditions.The red roses hide traces of innocent blood and the gorgeous smiles hide dark sides.You can be safe if your heart dies a bit n you say no.

The best way to save is to die, You can't touch the stars if you don't know how to fly.
The shine draws you in but the darkness strikes you way too late, You choose him over life and surrender yourself completely to his whims and declare them your fate. The whims unpolished bring troubles infinite and hurt vicious, The pain subsidies but the thoughts remain hideous. Escape,flight and freedom are those craved ways which often call, But they must remain unanswered as betrayal can end all. But if it continues will only mate remain and soul get lost? The weakness of the heart already freedom cost. Let him hear the urges and calls of flee, Even if he pulls the trigger the soul will be free. If you could just say no and let your heart bleed and cry, But now the only and the best way to save(soul,pain and sanity) is to die.

Author's Note

Hey guys this is my first poem here.I am really excited and a bit nervous.I request you guys to take some time out n read ma poem n provide me with ur valuable feedback n suggestion.Criticisms r wlcm bt Dey hav to b constructive.So enjy reading (hopefully) ☺.

Reviews

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Looks mre lik a story to me.I m using a cell phone n that's y having the space between lines issue.Well talking about story this is d story of a hapless romantic girl who falls in lov wid d wrong guy.She is drawn in by all his charm n smooth talking bt forgets dat all dat glitters is not gold.The guy drags her in his tainted world frm where der is no escape but only one..........d route to d other world journey.Tired n wounded she takes dat call n make her move.Final move