Unexpressed Feelings

Unexpressed Feelings

A Poem by rielovella
"

I wasted our memories with my heart full of pride.

"
The days and nights pass by
But the thoughts of you didn't left.
Wherever I look, only memories of you are remembered.
The times that we were together are too bitter for me to take.
For that I wasted it with my heart full of pride.
But I keep on longing for you.
I'm still wishing that everything will be fine,
That maybe past will be the present of you and me.
But how it will happen?
You left me alone in the midst of cold nights.
And worse, my heart feels colder than the snow.
How can it get warm,
If it only wants is you?
Can you come back once
And maybe a hug can heal this longing heart of mine?

© 2012 rielovella


Author's Note

rielovella
for my bestfriend.... :))
Comments and suggestions are welcome. :)

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I'm not sure if it was purposeful but in the second line, it reads better "but the thought of you didn't" leave instead of left. Other wise nice. I like the comparison as cold as snow. cute. C:

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 23, 2012
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Tags: unexpressed, feelings, poem, poetry, love, longing, hurt

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rielovella
rielovella

Muntinlupa, Philippines



About
I'm Liriel. 15 years old girl living in Philippines I like writing stories about love(especially about S.H.E. and Fahrenheit. In short, fanfic. :) ) and poems(if I'm inspired). I write likeS.. more..

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