Taking Your Hand

Taking Your Hand

A Poem by Dorita

             Taking Your Hand
             Whenever you feel anxious,
             Take his hand.
             Whenever you feel darkness,
             take a stand.
             And always remember how much,
             God wants to heal this land.
             And just as much He wants to,
             Take your hand.

© 2014 Dorita


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I really like this small and simple poem, it has a clear and true message within it. The only suggestion I have is instead of "And just as much wants to," "And just as much He wants to," I think that would make it flow better. I enjoyed reading this.

Good Job

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I really like this small and simple poem, it has a clear and true message within it. The only suggestion I have is instead of "And just as much wants to," "And just as much He wants to," I think that would make it flow better. I enjoyed reading this.

Good Job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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