Moonlight Sonata

Moonlight Sonata

A Story by 4$H
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How the unforgettable piece was made.

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Beethoven’s hands trembled with anticipation and his lower lip quivered. He was too close to give up, the time was now. His stroll turned into a trot as he hurried down an empty field, gazing at the inky sky and the downpour, mind constantly racing. His hands started moving from up to down, as though he was playing and imaginary violin. His heartbeat quickened as he recognized the street lamp in front of the shack. He pushed the door open and immediately slammed it back. No, he will not be disturbed. Glancing at the dreary interior of the shack, he picked up his violin and played. The tremble in his hand reduced and his shivering stopped. His body seemed to relax as he played the violin and his anticipation was quelled. His confidence rose; he was a born musician, a true artist. The symphony was divine, it seemed as though nature itself had held its breath. His eyes thinned to slits and turned red. His body gleamed as the moonlight collided with a pale skin, giving him a supernatural effect. He was no longer a man; he was a messenger of the Gods. The World was a void, and his, the only soul. His violin seemed to be telling a tale, a tale that started on a rainy night. The melody was soft, yet the message was aggressive. His fingers ran down the strings, as though the instrument was a part of his body. The piece grew larger and larger, and his worry reduced. His fingers danced on the violin, eager to play a final note on the instrument, and completing the very final aspect of his legendary piece, a piece worth recognition by the Gods. The wind blew as the final note struck, as though signing with relief, the music of the Gods had been revived. Beethoven seemed lost in thought, as he turned his neck back to stare at the sole witness to the music, a man sitting in an armchair, an expression of pure shock on his face. With a half smile on his face, he quietly walked out of the room. Moonlight Sonata was born.

© 2013 4$H


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I love Beethoven symphonies! Especially this one. Great!

Posted 10 Years Ago


That. . . was. . . the. . .best. . . thing. . . I. . . may. . . have. . . ever. . .read. . . that. . . involved. . . Beethoven.

Posted 10 Years Ago


4$H

10 Years Ago

Hahahahahaha I love the pauses!! Took me almost a minute to read :P
That...was..one...of...the.. read more
Haley Harrigan

10 Years Ago

You're welcome, sweetface!
Well written , well conveyed , well played...Bravo

Posted 10 Years Ago


4$H

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Its indeed pleasing to know that such a great writer has reviewed my writing :')
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly ...You are welcome...:)
Love this story, your love for the music is portrayed really strongly! Punctuation is good, vocabulary is good... 'his fingers danced over the violin' is my favourite line:) to improve I would suggest breaking the piece down into paragraphs so it is easier to read? Paragraphs can also help to build up tension and make a phrase stand out...'Moonlight Sonata was born.' would be an inspiring one-line paragraph to really finish it off! Hope this helps:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


4$H

10 Years Ago

Thank you sooo much :')
I have hardly received such detailed reviews ever :D
Viccy Rogers

10 Years Ago

No problem! :)
Beautifully done. I think of Beethovan in connection with the piano, but I can see how expressive the violin is.

Posted 10 Years Ago


4$H

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the reivew :D
I wrote it in a moment of inspiration, I really do not know much a.. read more

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Added on August 23, 2013
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4$H

Noida, -, India



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