Love Letter

Say all you have to Say,now.

I would not know where to begin this love letter to you
For in my heart lies secrets you never ever knew
Like the way I watch you when you sleep and ache for your tender touch.
At night I dream the silliest dreams of us running in the sand,
I'm flirting with you liked I use to do
We're walking and holding hands.
Our bodies are jubilant, our skin is new that's when I come to know
I must wake and face the facts, were much different than before.
Our hearts and thoughts are young,
But our bones are cold and sore.
So here i am once again watching you while you sleep,
Hoping that all my heartache and pain
Will bring you back to me.

Reviews

[Channele]

It's kind of like you wrote exactly how I am feeling with my special person in my life. Love is such a crazy but an important feeling. Good job, seriously! :)

[Robin]

Thank you very much for your review.

[Rita L. Sev]

Love lost - an important theme in poetry. You play it out well here.

[Robin]

Thank you

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

#in tears......i can relate to that,u have me in tears,ja hey wen u love someone so much that sometimes you feel like you losing them wen they in you arms and finally wen u eventually lose them,u wish they'd realise that u still wish the past happy time wud repeat themslvs....original! I love it bcuz its all so real nd the feelings are like fresh paint on a plain board of sorrow! Gud work im fightng the tears! Dam u!...lol excelent!

[Robin]

Awwww thank you very much for your heartfelt review. I really appreciate your thoughts.

[Azriel]

i really love this piece robin, it's so sincere, so much longing for things to be as they were in this poem. i think you conveyed that really well, especially with these lines,

"Our hearts and thoughts are young,
But our bones are cold and sore. "

and the idea of the dream and reality further brings this to life...
i guess it is about a loss of love in a way, but not in a complete way, just partially... i can't fully relate to this type of loss of love but i think i used to see this a lot in my parent's marriage...
nevertheless a great and quite emotional poem.

[Robin]

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked this piece. I enjoyed writing it although it is a sad piece.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A piece full of deep emotion and yearning love. Well set out, flowing and full of feeling.