I'll Always Remain

Complication within a relationship.

Such an uneven ground where I stand.
The grass with it's different shades
like the emotions I feel and
As I walk, I can feel the
rocks beneath my feet.

I should join them.
Bother your your walk,
Bother your peace..
Bother you.

But now the sun has fallen,
and I remain standing..

I remain staring,

I remain living,

I'll always, remain here.

Author's Note

It's been a rough year so far, I get angry,
yet I feel content.
I just am sharing a bit of both worlds in one.

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

Sometimes we stand with both feet on the ground, not firm but in a sway, as if torn between lands, a past and present or a choice we must to make. Not always do we need several words to explain ourselves, and I find you capable of turning simplicity into complexity by the use of a proper amount of paint. Often times that additional brushstroke will only cause damage, but when it comes to your poetry, every word has its relevance.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

LOve is complicated, and when a relationship ends the love will always remain, and God knows being friends afterwards is hard. You expressed yourself very well here, I hope it was therapeutic for you.

[realmwriter]

I think the ocean misses you. It's a torent of feelings all being felt at once. Pain, anger, regret, remorse. Happiness, joy, love, bliss, all right here at the readers eye tips...

[Edgar Perez]

Thank you so much! Honestly you are right on point, leaving the island
Has me all mixed up, and on some level I think it's helping me realize that
It's okay to feel this way, that time is only temporary.. And in the end I will be okay.
It's an honor to be reviewed by an amazing writer like yourself! Thank you dearly.

[realmwriter]

You're right, it is alright to feel that way. You left somewhere you prolly spent a great deal if not most of your life. That's unsetteling for even the most well traveled. I know this kind of unease, thats why I see it here. But it does get better.

[Edgar Perez]

Wow, grass and rocks, on one thought, that must be switching your clever mind....
I loved this.

You express here a real two-edged sword....
And I remain there too! my friend.

Well expressed... smiling :)

-Elisa

[Edgar Perez]

Elisa, your words are forever treasured.
I wish to one day meet the poets that dearly
encourage my life.
You are one of them, and for that
I long to one day have a beautiful
Morning of tea, conversation, and smiles.
Thank you for your review, and loving words! (:

You are more than welcome my bestie! I treasure you too! there are such things, as true friendship ya know? :) let's drink on it! Eddy!... always! Aloha dear to you!