Lip to Lip

Just a poem I wrote about my love of kissing

Her soft pink lips stare at my eyes
I move closer, my lips part
Her lips open, inviting me in
We both moan as our lips touch
My tongue slips past my lips and thru hers
The moistness from each of us mixes
A string of liquid connects us as I pull back
I put my lips together, tasting her on them
It never matters how many times I kiss her,
The pleasure never fades

Reviews

[little bad puppy]

-sly grin- i can relate. any more?

[Dawn]

Very nice. :)
And interesting, lol.

[kitty cat]

so beautiful, it's filled with desire.

[Sami Khalil]

Eyes connect as well as lips and many other things. This was pleasurable to read...:)....

[curiocity]

This is beautiful. So sensual and romantic. Well penned!

[New Theory]

Sexy description of kiss. Good one

[Relic]

Kissing is one of my favorite sports. There's nothing like the soft lips of a woman to make me feel good. Nice writing, the supple tones of erotica are all over this. :)

[Sarah]

Its really good. Quite cute actualy, Its short and pationate. :D

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautifully written, it's filled with desire.

Kaze~ :-D

[Tim]

You've written a tantalizing poem with sensual overtones here. Your lust for another woman can excite the male reader as well as the female reader. Kissing is an art form which opens the gate to intimacy.