SMOKER PART -2

SMOKER PART -2

A Poem by Chandler bing
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What happens afterwards to that smoker.

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                                                        SMOKER PART-2
When he was happy he smoked,
When he was sad he smoked,
His want for education was also ultimately stoked,
That box of cigarette was his most prized possession,
he smoked his way even through recession,
When the times were hard and the days were harder,
It was quite strange but his rings went even farther,
His cancer machine was a part of his personality,
Gone were the days when he behaved cordially,
He smoked away with glory and pride,
He knew if he didn't quit soon he would eventually die,
That habit which began during school had come a long way,
He always said this is my last one and I am quitting today,
But he couldn't the lust of just one drag remained forever,
till he was carried to his grave that fateful November. 

© 2014 Chandler bing


Author's Note

Chandler bing
**Hey everyone "NEVER EVER EVER RESORT TO SMOKING" because there are always people who love you and life is already short by smoking you make that time even more shorter**.

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Truth, truth, truth; this is an excellent poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I don't know. Many ways to die. I don't smoke. I also don't believe in being told what to do. Smoking, guns and what next. Control health care? Too late. Smoking like all things. I have know more folks who die from eating candy and drinking too much pop. Sugar diabetes killed almost the same as cigarettes. Ban eating candy and drinking soda. A interesting poem. My mother is almost eighty. Smoke and drink like her father who lived to 95. Happy people live longer. Let me have my weaknesses. A interesting poem. I hate cancer. I lost many to it. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem. Left a lot to ponder.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Powerful write. Great job, bing! (y)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Good advice in this piece of strong and well written words

Posted 10 Years Ago


A strong argument and good read, well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow , Its deep and strong. it carries the message for those who are trying to stop smoking.
AMAZING! I loved it(:
Keep up the good work!
- Stephanie


Posted 10 Years Ago


Chandler bing

10 Years Ago

thank you sister :)
There just had to be a part 2 and it carries precisely the same warning to everyone out here that it should.

I can relate to this 100% as a former very heavy but 4 years and counting ex nicotine addict... All Good Things, N

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chandler bing

10 Years Ago

yeah i know thanks man..
Neville

10 Years Ago

no problem
A fantastic aanti smoking poem. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a very important message and i hope people read this and get your point.Great write Mr chandlerbing(love FRIENDS much?) lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chandler bing

10 Years Ago

thank you so much and yeah it was a great show BTW how you doin?
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

That is my brothers favourite line from joey haha.Anyways I'm doin good

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