maybe

maybe..
you can see me,

through the fogged window
through a timeless kaleidescope

maybe..
you can feel me

crawling through your head
laughing til I cry
just maybe..

Reviews

[fireblossom]

I like this crazy surrealistic piece.

I want to read poems with an edge. My eyes are bleeding a little.

[soliloquy]

Better! I like this one.

[romanrose02]

Who is we, and what do you see?

[koty bell]

great write :)

One word: Nice. :)

[Steve]

Very nice! I like the poetic use of everyday words here.

[Hope]

"laughing til I cry"
hysterical laughter?

:/

[romanrose02]

do you?