Innocents lost

About a first time dissapiontment

Innocents lost

-Soft sheets tender kisses plow the way for endless wishes.

-Strip off the covers of deception, we all wear to hide our displeasure.

-Moonlight dances across our skin.

-Breathless words to never spoken again.

-A touch a sigh the moans of pleasure.

-We go to a place lost in our fever.

-Time frozen in our moment of passion.

-We dance with each other nothing else matters.

-Lie down and accept this gift.

-Teasing and needing what you have dreamed of before.

-Begging and pleading to be taken with more.

-Hearts race and breaths come quick.

-The moment of pleasure is at its end.

-Rolling over I say good night.

-Curling up you quietly cry, whishing and hoping to take back that moment in time.

-A moment of innocents lost in a flash, like a beautiful flower whose bloom will not last.

-Innocents lost like the tears of a poet, who can do nothing more, but sit there and dream of false wishes.

 

Reviews

[s y e]

I am taken by the imagery, Ron. You have left me speechless yet again.

[ron]

Oh you are digging in to my early stuff. You are my biggest fan Sye. I could love you for your words alone.

[s y e]

I am digging deep into your old poetry my friend.

[ron]

Dig away dear my friend.

[Carlton Carr]

I identify with every word Ron - great images following each other like deep breaths reaching for a climax - τђє pain and regret of τђє ending is exquisite - such longing. I loved it - how was it for you?

[ron]

It was kind of like my first time. I know it sounds strange but I was the one that expected more for my first time, but when she was done that was it. I wanted it to last longer.

[tuvi]

wow ...this one is soooo amazing ...loved it ...

[ron]

Thankyou very much. i hope to have moreso on.

[QuietlyCrash]

Wow, beautiful imagery.Nice job:)

[ron]

Thank you. I want to dig up all o my other poems and make a book of my old writingd and my newer writings.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thanks for sharing...:)

[ron]

Thank you very much.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)