I could look in your eyes

I could look in your eyes

 

 

I dare not look for fear I would become lost,

lost in your beautiful love.

 

The passion you show the kindness in you heart,

how sweetly I would lose my way.

 

I feel your touch, even though we have never met in person,

how warm your hands feel against my soul.

 

Your an Angel who has floated into my heart,

and made me cry tears of joy.

 

My hands tremble knowing we will never meet,

my heart becomes heavy knowing I have lost you,

even before we ever touch.

 

Would you kiss me gently in your dreams,

will you hold me in your heart when the moon shines so bright?

 

Would you allow one last thought,

as I die a little each night.

 

How beautiful your eyes do shine.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

So very romantic and the poignancy drew me between the lines. Absolutely divine work, Ron. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

What is your deal buster? How did you get so romantic.I love this .I wish someone would write me something like this ,Sigh:)

[s y e]

I have died and gone to heaven again. I agree with Frieda, this is a lovely, romantic read for that special my friend. You are exquisite.

[Frieda P]

Such the romantic ron....another write pen'd for the phantom angel of your heart. Sweet read.

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. No this one was for the enjoyment of writing it.

[Frieda P]

Either way ron, you're still that romantic guy. ;-)

[ron]

Thank you Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Always my pleasure redwood. Enjoy your weekend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha I need to just walk away but hot damn Redwood gets me every time lol

[ron]

Lol I will try Frieda. You cant get enough of the Redwood thing can you Vidya :)

[Frieda P]

Ha I always have her in mind when I type it now....haha

[Vidya Bacchus]

No I love me some Redwood lol

[ron]

Hmm I think I might be in a wee bit of trouble here...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You wish Redwood :)

[ron]

I bow to the two of you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well look at that a man that knows when he's beat a rare breed true lol

[Frieda P]

Ha frame this one......

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ain't that the truth lol

[Bright Ocean Star]

I love this. It is beautiful. The only technical thing is that you used the wrong "your". You should have used the contraction "You're", indicating You are. For compulsively obsessive, obnoxious people like me, it distracted me from the beauty of some of the subsequent lines, because it wasn't correct. But, it is an easy fix, and other than that, I thought it was breath-taking! Please publish more. I would love to keep reading your work.

[ron]

Thank you. I will correct the typo. I am responding to you on my phone right now so I will have to make the correction later. I am very happy you liked the poem.