Caught in your breath
A Poem by
ron
Caught in your breath
You exhaled,
and stole my heart.
© 2014 ron
Reviews
Your words used in this poem spark senses in the imagination.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much.
woah
Lovely
really and truly
Posted 9 Years Ago
woah
Lovely
really and truly
9 Years Ago
Thank you Chelsea. you are so kind.
9 Years Ago
^///^ Welcome
Sigh...I adore this, the title and the sentiment is exquisite ron...bravo!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Sigh...I adore this, the title and the sentiment is exquisite ron...bravo!
9 Years Ago
Aww thank you Frieda xo
9 Years Ago
It's a perfect gem, my pleasure :) x
9 Years Ago
You are very sweet xo thank you :)
This is gorgeous Ron, and shows how a lot can be said with a little. In the faves.
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is gorgeous Ron, and shows how a lot can be said with a little. In the faves.
9 Years Ago
-blushing- thank you again KL xo
Gosh...
What's worse? Stealing one's heart? Or stealing one breath?
This made me skip a little beat.
Short with a big boom.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Gosh...
What's worse? Stealing one's heart? Or stealing one breath?
This made me skip a little beat.
Short with a big boom.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Ance...:)
Short but impact-full. Bravo...:)........................
Posted 9 Years Ago
Short but impact-full. Bravo...:)........................
9 Years Ago
Thank you Same...:)
9 Years Ago
Muchly welcome...:)......................
Now that is cool.Really sweet and very awesome :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Now that is cool.Really sweet and very awesome :)
9 Years Ago
Thank you Vidya.
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Added on July 5, 2014
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ron Imperial, CA
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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic..
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