Caught in your breath

Caught in your breath

A Poem by ron

Caught in your breath



You exhaled,
and stole my heart.

© 2014 ron


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Your words used in this poem spark senses in the imagination.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ron

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
woah
Lovely
really and truly

Posted 9 Years Ago


ron

9 Years Ago

Thank you Chelsea. you are so kind.
Konigin

9 Years Ago

^///^ Welcome
Sigh...I adore this, the title and the sentiment is exquisite ron...bravo!

Posted 9 Years Ago


ron

9 Years Ago

Aww thank you Frieda xo
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

It's a perfect gem, my pleasure :) x
ron

9 Years Ago

You are very sweet xo thank you :)
This is gorgeous Ron, and shows how a lot can be said with a little. In the faves.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ron

9 Years Ago

-blushing- thank you again KL xo
Gosh...
What's worse? Stealing one's heart? Or stealing one breath?
This made me skip a little beat.
Short with a big boom.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ron

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ance...:)
Short but impact-full. Bravo...:)........................

Posted 9 Years Ago


ron

9 Years Ago

Thank you Same...:)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Muchly welcome...:)......................
Now that is cool.Really sweet and very awesome :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


ron

9 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya.
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Welcome :)

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ron

Imperial, CA



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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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