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Probbably will come back and finish but this is whats here so far Suggestions always welcome :)

V1:Am i just a daydreamer believing that i could still be with her the tears that have finally subsided i can now on my own dry my solemn eyes I made wishes i even prayed now theres nothing left and nothing more to say but i feel like i will live on alone for these upcoming days

C:Endless days long weeks restlessness is all that my heart keeps locked up inside of me your the only key that could've opened my insides i still wish there was something left something still there the feeling of love when your floating in midair and nothing can take the one you love away i wish you would just stay i wish you would just stay here with me

V2:Here today and gone by tomorrow the only thing that you did not take from me is the suffering and sorrow this feels like an unsolvable problem you meant more to me then anything to them. I would have been by your side through the thick and thin this must be a love game that no one ever seems to win

C:Endless days long weeks restlessness is all that my heart keeps locked up inside of me your the only key that could've opened my insides i still wish there was something left something still there the feeling of love when your floating in midair and nothing can take the one you love away i wish you would just stay i wish you would just stay here with me

B:Endless times that my hearts been in two i thought that you were the only one that could piece it, it would have been pieced for you these things that i am saying they are not lies they are all true and the only thing that used to be missing was you.

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

I'm not sure how to feel about this except that: That was very beautiful. I got a tad lost in the words you wrote. Almost a story for the heart. It was very nice. Love song would be a better discription of this piece I'm thinking...very pretty and emotion packed. (sad though it can seem at first...but one just reads deeper and finds a twinge of hope with each verse) :)

[Liderien]

this is beautiful. I have felt this, so the heart does mend but sometimes it takes so long.

[IAMAWESOME]

I love this, it's beautiful. You are a fantastic writer. :)