This Is No LOL Moment

An old angry poem

Did I really touch your heart? Or do your words just please the air?
Do you mean the words you say, cuz they float to no one there.
Am I in your thoughts at night when you lay yourself in bed?
Or do your thoughts just think about some other man instead?
Was this just all a big mistake? A cause turned into illusion...
Leading me in ignorance, and leaving me in confusion.
Please tell me that I think too much. Assumptions running wild
Second thoughts puncture me when it's him that makes you smile
Could I ever make you happy, or is there someone else who can
Why am I even with you? F*****g hell I'll never understand...

Reviews

[We are young.]

I liked this it was amazing! The first line
"Did I really touch your heart? Or do your words just please the air?" Was my favorite line, and kept me intrested right from the start.

[Lyrical Love]

This is a powerful write!
I feel the anger, but the word choices give an enjoyable rhythm to
the piece.
Nicely done.