With Love .. to the Moon

With Love .. to the Moon

A Poem by Roshan Nair
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A common theme I've observed in many poems, is the one that talks about/to the moon,what surrounds it, its beauty & scars, with the exact same passion,despite us being fundamentally unique poets

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In the cold of evening, I wake up in the dusty living room,

How did the sun leave so soon, where did it have to rush to?

The people here give me the love that has shaped my soul

I call out to the streets where the sweetened breads bloom,

There is a dusty din as the devils knights seem to pass numbing us all.

 

The pen is as old as my father’s grey mane; it’s still got some life,

It seems to call to me inside, asking what I see, in a strange language.

I try to wrestle with it as it makes me surrender:

Look out the window, there’s someone waiting for you all this while.

 

I look at her, she looks at me and we have found love.

There is no mercy or forgiveness; I give in to my new language to speak.

 

*

This maze is my home, I run through and across.

The joy of my feet only compares with the beat in my heart.

I watch the life as it grows within each wall, creating my empire,

My city, my kingdom, my life, each hand moulding a precious part,

I see myself within a wall and playing my simple drop in the ocean.

 

The chalks seem as ragged and dry as fallen peaches in the alley,

The wall calls out to me, to speak to it, a language I haven’t seen,

I stare at it blankly, questioning all I know, as it asks me:

What is it you see through the window while staring at the sky tonight?

 

I look it at him staring at me with his glance ever pure and cleansing,

I know no more than to let my mind to its calling, but I can’t help but drift into his rhythm.

 

*

My neck, it hurts as I crank it to see the flicker of light I call home,

To get back from my masked march in the lined rooms and corridors,

Concentrating all along, my mind has condensed into a burning ball.

The release they say are these bars and foliage in the back,

Where I am to be what I am again, the only recourse, as they planned.

 

The stairs seem to be leading me today to a place I don’t know,

I climb to the sound of my muted footsteps as they hasten.

It isn’t the old that call, but the voice that is calling me out is anew:

I’m waiting at the highest perch, come and see me, I long for you.

 

My minds perplexed, My heart seems to burn in the heat of the journey.

There he waits in earnest longing, waiting as I shed my days skin bare.

 

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There’s no connection as I look at you, yet I see a million eyes,

You’ve been the promise for many, of dreams you told no one would see.

I came here all alone to be in your presence, naked as I can be,

to feel your pulse as you feel mine, but wait..

We are not alone here are we? ...

I can see them now... 

I see the streets of dust and rust as you look,

I see the little houses of waste where from where you called,

I see the towers towering so clear; there are many but none waiting in line.

 

I see them... I see them all...

Can you...

Can you see me too?

 

We all get back inside after a while to bleed on any willing surface about our embrace,

 in the tender moments of nights care, that comforts us saying

...tomorrow you’ll meet again


Written By Roshan Nair
 Copyright © 2015 Roshan Nair

© 2015 Roshan Nair


Author's Note

Roshan Nair
No matter where we poets come from... I believe we are truly united by this one almost magical phenomenon of nature. I loved reading each piece by the other poets here about the moon and the unity of emotion comes through so beautifully across each writers penning this around the world.

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The opening is just wow! The transition from light to dark; mind still not set to the gloom whilst the eye catches a glimpse of the beautiful moon and falls in love.Clock as a Metaphor follows, envying it.
"in the tender moments of nights care, that comfort us saying
...tomorrow you’ll meet again" --Too Good(y)
Keep up Roshan :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roshan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot deepika :) Im glad you liked the piece, I tried getting scenarios from different enviro.. read more
Deepika

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your creativity! :)



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When i saw the title i thought it was a love poem... And its not actually my thing.When i came to this page i thought -duhh!! too long for my tastes.But whoa! As i started reading it felt like a tale and when i reached yhe last line i was- Uhhh. . it shouldn't have ended.You took an universal theme and penned it in your unique style. We writers may have same inspirations but everybody has a different way . Moon has been forever the best of muse for generations.You have dedicated this exquisite piece to it,thats nice. I liked the way you divided the poem into a male and female aspect.Like both you and moon have that longing to see each other tommorrow.Even after the din of daily life you find her presence sooting.The wait for her tommorrow will be hard... Ending locked away the excellence of this poem.Luna personified- common concept brilliantly penned. *keep writing*

~Sophy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roshan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot sophy.. Im gald you took out as much time to give such a nice and elaborate review, I r.. read more
Sophy Freebirds

9 Years Ago

De nada amigo. pleasure reading you.Cheers to poetry! :)
The opening is just wow! The transition from light to dark; mind still not set to the gloom whilst the eye catches a glimpse of the beautiful moon and falls in love.Clock as a Metaphor follows, envying it.
"in the tender moments of nights care, that comfort us saying
...tomorrow you’ll meet again" --Too Good(y)
Keep up Roshan :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roshan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot deepika :) Im glad you liked the piece, I tried getting scenarios from different enviro.. read more
Deepika

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your creativity! :)
There is nothing like the views God lets us see at night... the moon and stars, the rising sun, the beautiful colorful sunset, etc. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roshan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind comment kathie. Yes, nothing compares :) cheers
Valentine

9 Years Ago

You bet. Kathie
"I look at her, she looks at me and we have found love.
There is no mercy or forgiveness; I give in to my new language to speak.

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This maze is my home, I run through and across.
The joy of my feet only compares with the beat in my heart."

A universal phenomenon indeed as love am
nd music are universal languages of the soul... I like too much to visit your page for I feel the serenity...Bravo, sir...:).....................

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roshan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the kind review...Its extremely motivating :) Im glad you find my pieces serene. ch.. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)...................
I like the first line.
It's like it opened up the poem.
Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Roshan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thanks emily, Im glad you liked the piece :) cheers
This was a great idea for a poem and you executed it wonderfully! I love the vocabulary you used, it flowed really well. Nice job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roshan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot amanda! :) Im glad you liked the piece and the idea.. I couldnt help but pick it up and.. read more
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I agree with you my friend. The night- light of the universe, has inspired and will inspire infinite lines in us poets. Your account of this enchanting friend has a fresh and renewed feeling. It's full to the brim with lavishing imagery. I like your unique touch of the different usage of fonts. It was a pleasure to read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Roshan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot moonskittles. Im glad you enjoyed the piece so much ! I didnt know how else to create d.. read more
Adorable prose, this one! The conversation and the realizations, both are very interesting.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roshan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thans sindu :) glad you liked it. cheers
Again my friend your pen has put me in a state of utter awe!!!! This write is so fluent and
mesmerizing. This God given talent to pen your emotions is a true delight for us
the reader's, beautiful calming piece of work, I am a fan!!! Thanks again for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roshan Nair

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot james.. I truly appreciate your every review and am honored you think so about me. god .. read more

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Roshan Nair

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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