Forever Dream

Forever dream of me when you sleep.

Pray to God one day we’ll meet.

Until this day comes to be,

forever your heart will be safe with me.

My heart yearns for your touch I feel.

Your heart fills mine with love.

I heal.

Reviews

[mattavelli]

Hello, it was a quick clear message, but I think the punctuation needs a change.
"Until this day comes to be,
forever your heart will be safe with me." - the "until" "forever" combo here muddies your phrase. My guess is punctuation. Have fun!