You and Spring

You and Spring

 

the sun will rise once more tomorrow

slowly nibbling at the cold night sky

until red and orange flames consume it
 for breakfast 

like an egg over easy

 


the vernal equinox will herald

the 
arrival of a brand new spring


it is a time of renewal

and the
 moment to plant the seeds

of a 
fertile and abundant future

 

you stand in the middle of those glorious

tomorrows radiant and alive

your smile fueling my days as never before

and gypsy passion painting my nights

with broad strokes of conscious loving

that ignite my soul and call forth the

magic that is our coming together

Reviews

[MsJewel]

Love and spring....what could be more romantic. Gorgeous poetry Rubie!

:) Julie

[rubie]

Thank you for your review.
Appreciate the visit.

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Hello Rubie, so nice to read you and I am in perfect timing for a passionate rebirth it seems :) Spring is full of hope and promise for a fruitful life. Beautiful poetry, my dear poet :)

[rubie]

Thank you for your kind review, Lynn.
Appreciate you stopping by.

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pleasure was mine :)

[~]

I missed reading your romantic verses. A spring of the person that loves us with an undying passion. There is magic weaved skillfully in patterns of hearts and stars within your poetry.

[rubie]

Your reviews are like lovely poems themselves.
Thank you so much for your kind words.

[Lydia Shutter]

The imagery in your poem is breathtaking! There is so much hope for the future and so much romance in every line. Uplifting and a pleasure to read! Lydi**

[rubie]

Thank you for your kind review!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I can always close my eyes and be where your poem takes me.

I admire your work, more so with every poem I read!


My best,
Kelly

[rubie]

What an absolutely lovely thing to say!

Thank you so much, Kelly!

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This warmed my heart so much I felt goosebumps along my upper torso as the heat swept the cold away... the image of the sun 'nibbling away at the cold night sky' is breathtaking... the joyous cries of spring's arrival, the rebirth of nature's living creatures (and love)... such hope in the seeds sewn... and love standing in each of those tomorrows, lighting a fire in the soul... (sigh)..... beautiful poem, Rubie... absolutely gorgeous!!!!!

[rubie]

And likewise, your amazing review has warmed MY heart and given ME goosebumps! You do know how to return the favor, my friend.....
Thank you for your kind words.

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Glad you enjoyed it, my friend... I've been waiting days to read another of your poems... I come here every morning to check your page so imagine, to my surprise, when I arrived a short time ago, there it was... a poem, sitting there beckoning me to open it... I am just a humble fan of your work which I enjoy so very much...

oh, you are welcome for the review... :D

[rubie]

You are too, too kind.
And I am humbled and flattered by your words.

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there seems to be an awful lot of humbling going on :) I try only to write what I feel, Rubie... read morethere seems to be an awful lot of humbling going on :) I try only to write what I feel, Rubie...

I wasn't eavesdropping but was Jacob's reference to a book a project in the works?

[rubie]

Yes. Will send you a pm shortly....

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ok... thanks

[jacob erin-cilberto]

not only would i put this one in the book, i would make it the final poem...a perfect ending to wonderful volume.

love it.

j.

[rubie]

thank you, my friend, for your kind words and your excellent advice.