I heard you cry ! Please dont die!

Dan a twenty year old family member. Turmoil as he lays in a coma fighting for life.. turmoil for him and those around during Christmas 2012

Dan i know you cant hear me!
But your subconscious is discerning,
Only 20 yrs old, a mere fledgling.
The terror and pain, so harrowing.

As the bike lost control.
Such pain and hysteria.
I pray that you recover,
As you lay in a deep coma.

Your body is fighting for life.
Christmas is no more longer,
Your laying there so still.
As angels keep watch, No war!

Unseen angels surround you,
Keeping watch, holding your hand.
No fear as they talk to you.
Time has stopped its hand.

Our hearts are full of hope.
We love and cherish you so much.
And need you to live fully!
Fight Dan ! Don't perish!

There are dreams to fulfill,
Yes the journey may be long.
But you will get through,
With a smile and a uplifting song.

So hold on, let the healing take place.
Soon you will be with those close by,
Who hold you close to their hearts.
We just need you to know, Don't die!

Author's Note

All positive thoughts goes out to Dan to fight to make a full recovery - And hope he pulls through....

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I pray for his recovery too... it is never easy dealing with this type of situation... a very heartfelt and strong plea.

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou x

[kublakhan27]

My thoughts and prayers are with you...

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thanks Kub x

[b4b]

that's beautiful babe

T-F

[Bewitching Sensations]

thanks x

[David Scott]

Our thoughts have physical power. I too shall add even now my "voice" to lift up Dan in this valley he now travels. Also to those who love him and need him still.
Thank for sharing your care in such a beautiful way.

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou from the bottom of my heart x

[Ahmad Cox]

So beautiful and empathetic. I will be praying for him as well and sending out healing and positive thoughts his way as well.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou x

[SamanthaMarie]

Positive thoughts for Dan indeed! This poem in my head read as urgent, and the speed fast. I loved it and hope that Dan will pull through to enjoy it as well.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou so much x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ruth this is awful. I hope all goes well. X

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thanks John x