Into Dreams

My first Roundelet

Softly breathing,
up, down his chest flowing like waves

Softly breathing,
eye lids twitch deep in his dreaming
in, out his breath lightly cascades
until the morn', angel sighs fades
Softly breathing.

Reviews

[Tex]

Oh Ruth this is just wonderful. I felt I was beside the crib witnessing the events depicted in this little gem. Well written, very descriptive. Nicely done.

100/100