Hidden Underneath

Hidden Underneath

A Poem by NotAproved
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Some things mustn't be revealed to the world. No secret is a secret.

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They need me to talk
The secrets were not ready to limp back 
into the ever letting fire owned by truth

Loud silence is my murderer 
I can not die a death that death finds peaceful
I can not die a death that death can not die itself
So I lay there carrying my secrets,
The urge to end the oppressive weight converges into my actions

 I will leave my prison with flying colors
I close my eyes and there rests darkness
All there resides there is darkness
All there will ever be is darkness
In that darkness I found peace
Peace to relive my anchor
They needed me to talk

© 2016 NotAproved


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The burden of secrets is not an easy thing to carry. I get the point but to me the formatting is a little unclear. I had to read it twice to understand what you were trying to say. Nevertheless I hear you loud and clear.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


NotAproved

8 Years Ago

Thanks, I appreciate it. I was tired when I wrote it. But thanks for the review.

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Added on February 23, 2016
Last Updated on March 10, 2016
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NotAproved
NotAproved

San Antonio, TX



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