Santa Ana

Hit the wind Santa Ana, get it enveloped.

Hit the wind today
The air flows are squeaky clean
Pull your home out of the bedrock
Propeller it
House in the sky? Why not.
Pushing up and drifting down aurally
Townships too connected with their unmoving things
Get in touch with your nomad cloudcity
Fly props
Diesel shocks
Flame drops
Get all of it
Hit the wind now
Unbury expose
Yank the essentials up into the stratosphere
Modern idealism my foot, skyscrapers till got their asses in dirt

Yup we gotta hit the wind, time is short
The gray closing in from heaven and it's closing in from hell
Time is short
Hit the wind

Author's Note

Writing. Writing. Writing.

Reviews

[Wren]

I love the abstract concept. You can take many things from it, yet a visual message still stayed in my mind.

Good Job ^^

[Bare trees]

I'm not too sure what it means, as it seems abstract, but you have a nice style with some nice phrases throughout that give it kind of an oomph. Keep writing.

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amazing write :D