Old people get weary. Young people get mad. I know the feeling of this poem. Sometime we can't make no-one happy and feel frustrated. I like the ending. Better to smile and move on. Why waste energy on useless causes. A excellent poem.
Coyote
I think the colour isn't matching well, it is a great poem! But the colour will actually distract or should I say get readers think of something else?
Green is a peaceful colour, I dont think it match well with the poem. I think maybe deep blue will be better.
However, I just LOVE your poems!!!
Amazing poem, very powerful. I think whatever color your mood is telling you to use is what should be used. But i have to agree that sometimes the color takes away from the powerfulness of the poem. Great write
A. I think that color distracts readers from the power of the poem
B. This is an absolutely truthful and fabulous poem, and you did an excellent job.
Life can be rough.
But it's worth it.
I feel like that everyday dealing with childish people I mean being in 8th grade you would think the boys would be a little bit more mature. NOPE! Nice poem though beautiful, I think the world stopped caring a long time ago, I guess it's the little things people should learn to be thankful for. Nice job!
i think this a good color for the letters. as always, great poem. but i'm always sad when i hear about you going through this. its awful i know. :( i wish i could do something to help you. you can always call me if you need to talk about something and i'm not at the house. hang in there girl! things are going to get better!
My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..