I love you my darling

I love you my darling

A Poem by sarah

I can't help loving you
As we sit here
Watching the waves crash over the rocks
The sound of birds

I simply can't help loving you
As we gaze at each other tenderly
Your once dark hair is now a wonderful silver
Your once young face now has wrinkles

But I still can't help loving you
My high school sweet heart
My best friend
My lover

I love you
Every memory
Every fight
Everything makes me love you more and more

We love each other
After so many years
Of pain
And joy

So much of me belongs to you
My life
My heart
You were my first kiss

How could I not love you
The first boy to notice me
The first guy to kiss me
The first man to love me

I love you my dear
My best friend
My life partner
I love you so very much  

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
No couple in my whole family has gotten divorced, not one. And an old couple sitting next to each other just watching life move around them, and them knowing that they have lived a long and healthy life and they did it together and that is how I see myself later in life, sitting with my husband, watching the the ocean, drinking tea. And simply be even more in love then we were when we first met. This is just a dream of mine! let me know what you think.
PS I don't really plan on marrying the first guy I kiss or even date for that matter...too late for that anyway, but it is a nice thing to dream of.

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You have a hard goal to accomplish. World had changed. I believe a person who do the right things can find happiness. Never rush into a relationship. Bad people cannot be changed. A beautiful poem of love and hope. I like the language. Remind me of Grandmother writing this poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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awww this is very sweet sarah

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hope your dream comes true, my friend.
It is the sweetest of lives, that where the sharing and caring grows and grows as the years go by.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely work. Its just a perfect scene of true love and I hope I could honoured to find such a relationship for myself, and I hope you do too. Great job Sarah

Posted 13 Years Ago


I hope you find your dream, but know, if you do not, it is not failure to end a bad relationship; it is kinder for the children. The only way to fail at a relationship is to not try; but if your oartner will not also try, you cannot succeed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


tremendously touching, thank you Sarah

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have a hard goal to accomplish. World had changed. I believe a person who do the right things can find happiness. Never rush into a relationship. Bad people cannot be changed. A beautiful poem of love and hope. I like the language. Remind me of Grandmother writing this poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww i love this poem its just way cute hun awesome job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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