Invisible

I don't pretend to be anything great
I don't claim to shine in any type of subject
I don't pretend to stick out in a crowed

People look at me for a second
But pass me by without a second thought
People don't really see me at all

I am invisible
I don't pretend to be anything more
I have excepted it

People don't take the time to see me
They don't take the time to know me
They don't bother to waste time to understand

I found comfort in my loneliness
I don't know anything other then being alone
And overlooked

I don't know how I got here
But it's all I know
And I don't think i'll know anything else  

Author's Note

what do think?

Reviews

[Kelly M.]

This is sad and is true for some girls and guys. Many people won't stop to realize who you are in the inside. Instead of what you may be like on the outside. Good write! Keep it up! :)

[Marie Harrison]

Living in a large city, we all feel like this from time to time. Loved this form of self expression. It was stark and beautiful to me.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

nice write

[Inci 2]

well written.. good stuff

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

inside awareness, not too many like you, getting stronger . . . nice Sarah!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

the sweetest

[Cynthia]

Wow! It's great!
This remember me myself too! I think this poem is trul y relateble!

[SilentSKY]

I liked it- its good, but if read allowed, it doesn't flow very well. Regardless, I love it because it reminds me of us as humans.

[Calypso]

This reminds me of my self. My its because of my clothes or because because of my low grades, but I never stick out. I'm just too average. The good thing about this website is that it makes me feel good about myself.

[KAREN]

I like it just the way it is! It said just how this person is feeling!