It's amazing

It's amazing

A Poem by sarah

It's amazing
What a simple touch can do
How much it can mean to someone

It is amazing
How much a kiss on the cheek can mean
To a broken heart

When we cry
All we want
Is to be held

We want to be touched
Held closely
Loved

The simplest touch
Could lift a persons spirits
Make them forget the pain for a moment

It's amazing
What a simple touch can do
How much it can change a person

We all want to be touched
We want someone to hold our hands
We want someone to care

It truly is amazing
What touch can do 

© 2010 sarah


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Its truly amazing how true this poem is, to perhaps every single teenage girl in the world... Obviously including me (-.-).. Well done, this is fantastic!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very cute and sweet poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you knoe, it really is :) touch can save lives

i really like this poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow!
Your poem is amazing! I agree, your poem keeps being better and better!!
Great Work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another really heartfelt write here.....love the sentiment behind this one too...I sense a new theme in your writing maybe?..:)
Yeah, the power of the human touch can work miracles.....great message..:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i get this one completely! your writing just keeps getting better and better!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alot of heart felt writing in the peace! Love the flow!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The old Biblical expression of healing through "the laying on of hands" can mean a lot in this interpretation. Everyone needs love and acceptance. Bless.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was just WONDERFUL!!! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely said.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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