I meant it

They called it puppy love
Sweet
Innocent

They said it would never last
That all they had to do was wait it out
That no matter how hard we tried
It would end...

They were right
It was temporary
It only lasted for a moment

And maybe every word you said to me was fake
It's possible
I wouldn't doubt it

But I just have to say
Before I lose my mind
And before you walk away without looking back

I meant everything
Even if only for a moment
Even though it didn't last
I wasn't lying

When I said those two words
For the very first time
I meant it when I said

I love you....

Author's Note

Just thinking out in a writing

Reviews

[Neg]

I can relate to your writing. I once was in love and everyone said it was puppy love. And like in this writing's situation; they were right as well. I also mean't every word I said. Good straight to the point writing. keep it up.

[Sarah Jane]

I get the idea. I had a boyfirend that was doomed from the start according to my family. turns out it was, but It doesnt mean i didnt care about about him at the time. I like this:P

[Coyote Poetry]

When the gifts of love is given. It will be a permanent part of us. I like the ending to your poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Abbie]

kinda confused aboutthis but very good write :)


100/100

[Nish Nish the Fish]

beautiful :') A tear travels down my cheek as i read this, loved it.

[Linear]

Three words I love you Beautiful poetry :O)

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This is a bittersweet break up poem. I like it!

[Calypso]

Awww so sweet. I hope he felt the same for you!

[Saisha]

really well written...I think everyone can relate to this at some point in their lives..
love it!

[Terra]

i really love it.that is how i feel right now.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great poem!