Rules to live by

Rules to live by

A Poem by sarah

Make every moment count
Never be anyone you aren't
live each moment like it's your last

Be as different as possible
And be glad of it
Normal people aren't worth mentioning

But the loons will be the ones
That will always be remembered

© 2011 sarah


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Don't become a loon for a wrong reason. It is cool to be different but sometime we must walk a line and do what we need to do. I agree with opening lines.
"Make every moment count
Never be anyone you aren't
live each moment like it's your last"
A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I wasn't particularly crazy about the start with all the cliches. I was half expecting "dance like no one is watching" in the next stanza. But you recovered nicely and finished it excellently. It became obvious that the cliches were intentional.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

reminds me of a saying "Well behaved, and proper women rarely make history". ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Don't become a loon for a wrong reason. It is cool to be different but sometime we must walk a line and do what we need to do. I agree with opening lines.
"Make every moment count
Never be anyone you aren't
live each moment like it's your last"
A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this too and I am a loon and a weirdo :P Good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice.i am a loon lol.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Great advice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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