This is not nearly as good as I had hoped and I had a REALLY hard time putting it together. But to be honest I wasn't trying to make it great I was just writing what I was feeling. I was talking to my friends about the guy I like and I think he heard me, and now he is acting weird and I am really really upset.
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People are creatures of the unexplained (if that makes anyt sense) and always turn up when least expected. I think the best poems and stories are the ones where you write what you feel, when you don't use a formula or try to make everyone else happy. Great work, Sarah. Chin up, it will be fine.
I had read your note and then your words.. Your poetry is filled with heart, the painful emotions that rise when we hurt another. I think it has a depth and soul to it, and i wish more people could set pride aside and plead for forgiveness.. It's becoming a lost art..
My Grandfather taught me. "Nothing good to say. Say nothing." Words can be knifes that create wounds and bridges that can be rebuilt. A sad poem. Some wisdom in your words for all. A excellent poem.
Coyote
Aww I'm sorry. Maybe he's just in a stage of shock. This was a beautiful poem, you poured your feelings into it. Any guy would be lucky to get that kind of attention. So keep your head up, everything will work out fine.
♥ Ta'Shandra
Love it! You bare your soul in this one. Divulge your feelings for another without knowing he was there. What a gift you've given him, the knowledge of your devotion. I would think he would be flattered. Lovely poem.
You painted a canvas full of sorrow here. It's so depressing. I love the emotions as I read, i felt it. It's a great write. And don't worry sometimes that happens to us. I know it may feel like its totally over.. but his thoughts might change. He probably just didn't know you liked him in that way and it shocked him? But don't be too sad over him if it doesn't work out.. I hope things are okay and cheer up girl ^o^ Lovely write! keep going.
People are creatures of the unexplained (if that makes anyt sense) and always turn up when least expected. I think the best poems and stories are the ones where you write what you feel, when you don't use a formula or try to make everyone else happy. Great work, Sarah. Chin up, it will be fine.
My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..