Agony

Agony

A Poem by sarah

Just stop!
Stop acting
Like your my friend

Your not okay?
So just stop
Stop pretending

Just stop acting like you care
Stop faking excitement
Every time you see me

Because when you pretend like you care
You might not know this
And you probably don't care

But I believe you
Every smile
Every chuckle

I believe you when you say you are my friend
I believe you every time you pretend to want to know
What's happening in my life

JUST STOP ACTING LIKE YOU REALLY CARE!!


Because when you pretend to care
It hurts twice as much
When I realize

You could care less....


© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
I just seem to be surrounded by a bunch of fake people fake friends fake everything and I just hate it don't pretend to care cause it isn't a joke to me

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Aww! I'm so sorry you have to deal with people like that. I hate people who are fake too. It's like, If you really don't care about me..why even try to show you do? Be my friend or get out of my life. This poem is very relatable and so full of strong feelings. I loved it. The pain shows well. Sorry you have to go through that. But sometimes we do need to let go of the people that we don't matter to. It makes our lives much better. =) Hope things get better soon for you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It is so sad that people have to pretend to be someone they are not, fake friends, dramatic people who assume that if they are nice to your face, they appear to be some great person attempting to be there for you, there will be people like that through out your life and it is really sad that they have nothing better to do than pretend to be so innocent.. This is a great write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I know how this feels. It is terrible and people can be so fake at times. You just have to be strong and things will work out. Great poem and I love the way you write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


just distance yourself from fake friends..

Posted 12 Years Ago


i also hate pretenders they're such a jerk...

i like the stanzas:

Just stop acting like you care
Stop faking excitement
Every time you see me

Because when you pretend like you care
You might not know this
And you probably don't care

Posted 12 Years Ago


Don't surround urself by the fake people people if u dont want to put up with their crap. Ignore them and surround urself by family and friends. the ones that do care. Great poem. Keep writing me and send some read request. I enjoy ur poems.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know how it feels to be surrounded by the people who call themselves as my friends but actually hates me...... this poem is great you expressed the feelings here very well

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww, im very sorry, but this is a great poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We certainly don't need phony friends in our lives. I think I've known a few people like that, I hope I haven't been one of them. You get angry when folks aren't sincere, it makes your blood boil.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is so sad. I hate this situation for you. I empathize for you kiddo. If you ever need to talk to somebody I am here for you even though it may not be much of a help, still I would do all that I can. You expressed your feelings well in this poem, hope everything gets better for you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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