Away from You

Going through a state of trance,
I don't realize what i am talking...
Sometimes i felt i should, sometimes not,
Away from you i am walking...

Saying what i shouldn't and not what i should,
I think i am going a bit insane...
Oh god! i need some help and guidance,
For truly i can't bear this pain...

Author's Note

This is my first one so please bear with me ...
n share if any comments...

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

IT'S A BIT CONFUSING...
IN A GOOD WAY...
THERE'S A PUSH-N-PULL FACTOR INVOLVED...
I CAN FEEL THE PAIN...
OF HAVING TO WALK AWAY FROM THE ONE YOU LOVE...
IT IS VERY HEARTBREAKING...
THIS IS A GOOD PEICE...

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going through a state of trance
i don't realize what i am talking
sometimes i felt i should, sometimes not
away from you i am walking

saying what i shouldn't and not what i should
i think i am going a bit insane
oh god! i need some help and guidance
for truly i can't bear this pain

. it's a bit tough to negotiate sms lingo, my friend ... is totally avoidable ... that's why i typed it out again ... it's a sweet, simple and meaningful poem ...