SOUL

SOUL

A Poem by SAGAR
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Love your SOUL, Trust your SOUL..

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A SOUL…

Do you really possess... a Soul...?

Soul... just an amalgamation of mind and body... Can't see it, Can't hear it, Can't touch it... Soul, just a feel, do you really have it?

Soul, never sleep, never run, never rest... young, old; possessed by all, do you really know it?

Possibly, no lust, creed, hunger, fear or greed... Soul, living or non-living, could you really sustain it?

Always has an answer, in times of need or even not.... reply on its own... even if you agree or not... Soul, do you really believe it?

Aura of its presence, solicitude of its happening, evasiveness of its existence, enigma of its faith, trust... Soul, do you really love it?

True companion, best mate, friend, foe, before, now and even after, Soul... do you really respect it?

Soul is a prayer, sent by he himself... is a sacred, religious sermon of God, respect it, abide it... in your heart, share its radiance with others... Soul, do you really care?

Do you really use it...? SOUL...

© 2014 SAGAR


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This plays out quite differently for a read...the questions do hinder a bit for a reader...there are many...but I did see a couple places needing changes --- to reflect this piece more:

Soul, living or non-living, do you really could sustain it?
Soul, living or non-living, do you really sustain it?
and/or
Soul, living or non-living, could you really sustain it?
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reply on its own... even if you not agree...
reply on its own... even if you do not agree...
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as for the subject matter and style of this goes about --- making of an interesting read...

Posted 9 Years Ago


SAGAR

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the corrections. I have already done it.
As far as the myriad questions whic.. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

9 Years Ago

You're welcome...
SAGAR

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot again...

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SAGAR
SAGAR

Amritsar, Punjab, India



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